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問題と自分の解答をLINEで送ると、ChatGPTで添削された英作文とアドバイスを返信いたします。
具体例1
１．スタディグレイスの公式LINEへ 問題と自分の解答を送る
問題Describe one of your best childhood memories. Explain what happened and why this memory is important to you.（100語以内）
解答My best memory is visiting New Zealand. Before I visited there I thought effort something is only important to be a nice adult. So I studied hard until late, had dance lessons every weekend. Occupied schedule satisfied me but I didn’t have enough time with my Family. However in New Zealand, the school classes were very easy and I didn’t take any lessons. Then I spend a lot of time with my host family and talked a lot. This experience made me realize that we need relaxed time to do something hard such as study and lessons. So I try to make relaxed time in everyday life.
２．スタディグレイスのＬＩＮＥから返信があります。
“One of my cherished childhood memories is my visit to New Zealand. Before this trip, I believed that relentless effort was the sole path to becoming a successful adult. I diligently studied and attended weekend dance lessons, filling my schedule to the brim, but leaving little time for my family.
However, my perception shifted during my New Zealand adventure. School was easy, and I had no structured lessons. This newfound freedom allowed me to spend quality time with my host family, engaging in heartfelt conversations. This experience emphasized the importance of balancing hard work with relaxation in life.
This memory is invaluable as it taught me to prioritize both dedication and meaningful connections.”
３．返信について疑問点を返信ください。
高校生レベルの単語を使って100語以内におさめてもらいたいです。
４．スタディグレイスから返信
“One of my fondest childhood memories revolves around my trip to New Zealand. Before this adventure, I firmly believed that unceasing effort was the key to becoming a successful adult. I diligently studied and attended dance lessons every weekend, creating a hectic schedule that left me with limited family time.
However, my perspective underwent a significant shift during my New Zealand sojourn. Schoolwork proved surprisingly undemanding, and I had no structured lessons to attend. This newfound free time allowed me to bond with my host family, fostering heartfelt conversations. This experience underscored the importance of maintaining a balance between hard work and leisure in life.
This memory remains invaluable as it imparted the lesson of prioritizing both diligence and meaningful connections.”
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具体例２
１．スタディグレイスの公式LINEへ 問題と自分の解答を送る
問題environmental problems are serious issue. Recently scientists have discovered that around one million plant and animal species are in danger of dying off. Saving them is possible, but only if we act quickly. What kind of environmental problems are causing these plants and animals to disappear? What could you do as a university student in your daily life to help save them. Write your ideas in about 100-120 words of English.
解答Now we buy a lot of thing and throw away them. In my opinion, this is the cause of many plant and animals to disappear. Many companies built factories to produce items for sale. Then many trees were cut and some animals can’t live anymore. Also factories often emit CO2. That cause acid rain and it effect some plants. I think that most of companies know about it but don’t quit for their profit. It’s difficult to solve this problem immediately but we can stop buying thing little by little. Also we can spread information about environmental problem by using SNS.
改善点を教えてください。
２．スタディグレイスのＬＩＮＥから返信があります。
あなたの解答には、いくつかの改善点があります。以下は改善すべきポイントです：
- 文法と文構造:
• 文法の誤りがいくつかあります。特に、動詞の時制や主語と動詞の一致に注意が必要です。
• 文章は短い文からなる複数の独立した文で構成されていますが、それらを結びつけて段落を形成することが望ましいです。段落を使うことで文章の構造が整理され、読みやすくなります。 - 表現力:
• より具体的な説明が必要です。どの環境問題が植物や動物の絶滅を引き起こしているのか、もう少し詳細に説明すると良いでしょう。 - アイデアの整理:
• アイデアが少し散漫であるように感じます。アイデアを整理し、段落ごとに特定のトピックに焦点を当てることが重要です。
以下は、あなたの解答を改善するための提案です：
“Environmental problems are a pressing global issue, and recent scientific discoveries have revealed that nearly one million plant and animal species are on the brink of extinction. This alarming situation is a result of various environmental challenges.
One significant factor contributing to the decline of these species is our culture of excessive consumption and waste. Many companies operate factories that produce goods for the market, leading to deforestation and habitat destruction for countless animals. Furthermore, these factories emit CO2, which contributes to acid rain and negatively impacts plant life. Despite being aware of these issues, some companies prioritize profit over environmental conservation.
As a university student, we can take several actions in our daily lives to address these challenges. Firstly, we can reduce our consumption habits by making mindful choices about the products we buy and minimizing waste. Secondly, we can leverage social media and online platforms to raise awareness about environmental issues, encouraging others to take action.
While the scale of these problems may seem daunting, individual actions can collectively make a significant difference in the fight to protect our planet’s biodiversity.”
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テクノロジーの進化により勉強の仕方も変わってきています。
問題の写真を撮るだけで解答解説をしてくれる未来は近いかと思います。
しかし、その解法を理解するために学習者が手と頭を動かすというのは変わらないと思います。
スタディグレイスでは、学習において一番重要な『学習環境』を提供しています。
進路相談、学習相談もできます。
AI教材の「アタマプラス」を用いて自分専用カリキュラムで学習することもできます。
一度見学・体験されると学習時間が伸びる『空気』を実感できると思います。
LINEからの見学体験予約をお願いいたします。
